From Grandpa's Workshop

by • Uploaded: Nov. 26 '12 - Gallerized: Oct. '13

Float

Description: they make toy airplanes
Status: Just for fun
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Tags: simple • airplane • banner • grandpa
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samdemastrie Oct. 19 '13

All the solid red in this piece makes it difficult to distinguish between the plane and the banner. Also, the blue in the background looks like it's popping through in front of the red.

cream5 Oct. 20 '13

I think you should add more whitespace between the cloud and the plane. Also around the engine and the wings. Overall a more thicker white stroke.

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