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week 4
Jellyfish Press is a new press company in town. It was started by a group of designers fresh out of school.
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steven Henagers College
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I'm really liking this! but id bring the font just a touch closer to the jellyfish. but i love how the lines look. i jellyfish are squirmy but you pulled this off very well!
ReplyTo me it looks like an alien drooling. The dark red does not work well with the black background and I am also trying to figure out why the jellyfish has an eye in it. Nice clean lines though.
Replyi like this illustration a lot. granted it doesn't scream jellyfish to me, the colors and the shape. it reminds me of mike from monsters inc. if was stoned and ate some bad tuna. i don't know why that appeals to me, but it does. cheers
ReplyTake the eye out. The jellyfish body should be a little flatter with a larger opening to better illustrate a jellyfish. Make the jellyfish tenticles long drips like ink. Use CMYK colors to relate to "press". Change the font to a san serif that compliments the style of the jellyfish. Do all that and you'll have something really decent.
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