Good concept done badly. Color does not fit a cafe, font is hard to read and the image needs a lot of work, instead of lines/shapes with strokes, try making an outline of the cup using a pen tool or a brush. Same goes for the steam, don't use lines, it looks like a clipart more than anything. But then again it's a WIP, this has a great potential, keep working on it :)
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Good concept done badly. Color does not fit a cafe, font is hard to read and the image needs a lot of work, instead of lines/shapes with strokes, try making an outline of the cup using a pen tool or a brush. Same goes for the steam, don't use lines, it looks like a clipart more than anything. But then again it's a WIP, this has a great potential, keep working on it :)
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