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Academic Work, Fictional business.
Design Brief: Business is a downtown sports bar known for it's lime infused beer and large televisions. Target audience is men, ages 21-40.
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I'm looking for critique so if you have any suggestions please let me know! Thanks :)
ReplyInteresting look. Initially I had a little bit of difficulty because the lime shapes below the type almost looked like letterforms. I would recommend simplifying that area to match the aesthetic of the football shape above the type so it's easier to read. Also, the drippiness, I would probably contain that to the lime area or the type, not both. Probably keep it off the type so it's easier to read.
ReplyThanks @samdemastrie
ReplyI agree with all of what you said... I'm gonna try and simplify the lime and work on the drippiness!
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