Foremost Falcon's Volleyball

by • Uploaded: Dec. 09 '13 - Gallerized: Dec. '13

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Description: Copyright Josiah Jost and Siah Design or respective client © 2013
Status: Work in progress
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Tags: custom type • team • logo • crest
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ru_ferret Dec. 21 '13

I think it's good, at least better than it was before. As for me:
1. I'm not a big fan of strokes, though they are a common thing in sport logos.
2. I also think it could be better to separate the type and the emblem.
3. I love the details you've added to the type, but the mark is more dynamic visually. How about italics? Just my three cents :)

ClimaxDesigns Jan. 15 '14

I agree ^^, you get that book yet Nikita?

ru_ferret Jan. 15 '14

Hey, David. In average ordinary shipping takes about a month! )

sirwilliamwesley Feb. 25 '14

I love the type, but can't help seeing a sea turtle instead of a falcon. Perhaps, since falcons have large eyes, there would be opportunity to focus on the head and use the volleyball within?

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