Luka Balic Design

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Description: This is first of two versions for my personal logo. Logo is made of initials of Luka Balic Design. I wanted to incorporate feather in logo because feather was first design tool. Second version here: http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/148262 Help me choose the right one. Your comments are very wellcome, thanks!
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ubishere Sep. 29 '11

Yep this is the better version of the 2 imo.**Should the tip of the feather be slightly more pointed?*

balic Sep. 29 '11

If I made the tip thinner it wouldn't be visible when I scale down the logo, and I need it to be clearly visible because it forms the %22B%22 letter.**Thanks for comment!

nathantrafford Sep. 29 '11

I think you have an opportunity here to make something nice. I would forget the L, as 'Balic Design' sounds better anyway. I like the shape of the feather here, but don't know if it's enough to represent the B if you get rid of the L. I would play with maybe another two small parts of feathers or something to fill the space where the holes of the B would normally be.

balic Sep. 29 '11

I like the way you're thinking about the B letter.*I'll try that but I think D won't be visible if I put away L.*And I also like how this shape is closed with L, without it would look open. But I'll try what you suggest anyway.*Thanks!

cerise Sep. 29 '11

I prefer this one mate.

dulesaga Sep. 29 '11

I like the concept, but i think you need to work a little more on the fether part. For example the white line cutting in the tip of the feather is bearly visible, on smaller sizes it will desapier.

balic Sep. 30 '11

Thanks on comments guys!*@dulesaga - I didn't want the line to be too visible (to distract).*But I guess I should make it little bit thicker.Thanks!

aviat- Sep. 30 '11

Out of the two posted I'd have to say this one hands down. Definitely the most original approach out of the two.

nathantrafford Sep. 30 '11

I don't see a 'D'?

Jorge Codina Sep. 30 '11

Hey, thanks for your comment. I think this is a better version of your logo. i think it's make better reading.**regards**Jorge Codina***PD: My english is not very advanced, sorry

jands Sep. 30 '11

this looks pretty good :) What about of making an L a bit smoother ?

orca design Sep. 30 '11

Yeah this one is our favourite Balic. I agree with jands though, perhaps a more organic L would be more suitable? Nice work though.

balic Sep. 30 '11

Thanks everyone for comments!**@nathantrafford : The %22D%22 letter is made of L and the feather.**@jands and @orca : Thanks for suggestion, I'm trying out some variations.

mosti Oct. 01 '11

My favorite %3B)

Type and Signs Oct. 03 '11

agree ... my favorite too !

Mason Roberts Oct. 05 '11

My favorite toooooo! :) I think just simplify the 'Luka Balic Design' to just one font and you'll have a winner.

Sean Heisler Oct. 07 '11

Sorry for the late reply here, Luka! I agree with the others here, I like this one best. I love the implied D shape, really nicely done in that hidden sort of way that you discover!