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I just had a similar comment for someone on the forums, but I think that %22Community Church%22 underneath should be in a much simpler font. The way the logo is set up, that part is sort of an afterthought to %22Bayside,%22 so it shouldn't command very much attention. If anything, you could try switching the fonts. %22Bayside%22 in the script and %22Community Church%22 in the sans-serif. Although I'm not sure how well the script works together with the B graphic in the first place.

Thanks Adam, yeah I agree. Still playing.**I really don't like letters that have descenders, they screw up spacing :(**Outside of that, do you think the B mark works?

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That looks cleaner for sure. And it goes with the mark better.**I think the B mark works okay. It's not groundbreaking or revolutionary -- I've seen the same basic thing done before. But it's not bad.

Personally i think it's too complicated...i like the other solution you posted (green typography). Maybe you can add a subtle cross or something representative of a church?

I like it but is there a reason you went with such an overused style? Client request?