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Love some feedback on this concept. Thanks.

it is hard to see.. from first look i saw tent and some kind of trambone..

I'm going for a horn and a shopping bag. Perhaps the bag is too tent like. I'm trying to combine the handles from both items to mesh.

understand that, but think need to improve it somehow

I think the 'tent' is what is distracting it right now. I'll see if I can find a solution to it.

I saw a kettle :-)

interesting, lumo %3B) here look at this http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_lpFvUD9O3hQ/TAbZRUY2HDI/AAAAAAAAJOE/UIUFXjyV-es/s800/loewe paper bag.jpg maybe try to do something with right corner of bag? one or two extra lines. just need something not big and i will identify that is is BAG! because now it looks like Deividas said - tent :))) good luck, mate!

Made some updates to this.

add some little detail to the bag, James. or change the shape a bit, or maybe something like deiv suggested. that might do the trick.

I've lowered the bottom right corner and added the line to give more perspective of the bag.

I think what might help too, James, is rounding the handle of the horn so that is looks more like the handle of a fancy shopping bag.

very very nice style :o)