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a new brand for fish food products. they want it to be funny, accessible and direct. so is it working? and which view do you prefer?
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I think you have a good start, if I may make a couple of suggestions!***1.* You might consider giving the fish some personality to make it more memorable e.g (Turn it into a cute, clumsy sea lion).***2.* You might want to adjust the colors used in the type e.g (darken the green or lighten the blue).**I hope you don't mind my input!
ReplyI totally agree with *Kode*, he makes great points! I like this perspective better!
ReplyThese are great inputs Kode, and I really enjoy a good critique :)*but don't you think turning it to sea lion will deviate a little from the main product category? its %22fish food%22, but am with you 100%25 on giving it a personality, but I think am half way there by making it fat %3B) , right?**Thanx again and I'll work more on that***CHEERS
ReplyI totally think you're very close, I suggested turning it into a see lion just as an example and because I almost see it right now!*I haven't done much research on sea lions but I think they %22Eat fish%22, I could be wrong on that though%3B)**I'm sure you won't have any problem giving it a bit more personality, what you did with your penguin is nice!*Good luck man, *happy holidays!***
ReplyLOOOL :D*Thanx mate, and I sure will work on giving this fat fishy a fishy personality hehehe**Happy Holidays man :)***CHEERS
Replynot fat enough!!!... fatter!!!
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