CampaignBreeze : V1

by michaelspitz • Uploaded: Feb. 17 '10

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jn Feb. 17 '10

I havent seen this before. If it wasnt for the letter closure i would think this was associated with windmills. I like it though - i think you have got a good concept here.

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ethereal Feb. 17 '10

I like it, Michael. What if you moved the lines so they come right off the corner? Know what I mean, the outer line kind of starts in a tad from the corner, seems weird. Great concept.

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michaelspitz Feb. 17 '10

@jn - Cool. I was kind of going for the 'pinwheel' hit (I'm sure windmill's are fine too)... %3B) Thanks a lot for the comment!**@ethereal - Thanks a lot Sean! I'll definitely try adjusting the lines.*

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michaelspitz Feb. 17 '10

*Updated**@ethereal - I moved the lines and smoothed out the edges to the circle %3E I think it's playing better now... If you have any additional thoughts feel free to let me know %3B)

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jn Feb. 17 '10

Either reduce the size of the mark og make a vertical alignment instead. :)

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michaelspitz Feb. 17 '10

@jn - Done %3B)*It's going to have to be horizontal at some point...but I think I'm mostly interrested in feedback on the mark at the moment... In any case %3E new type here as well...

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Chad Sanderson Feb. 17 '10

I think the type on breeze could be thickened up just a hair. Lovin the mark though.

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michaelspitz Feb. 17 '10

@Chad Sanderson - Cheers my man! Type shall hence be thickened... %3B)

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reddskinn Feb. 17 '10

I think the concept is well communicated, although, something there reminds me a swastica (very subtle) maybe I'm seeing non existent things :)

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michaelspitz Feb. 17 '10

@reddskinn - Hmm... (Certainly not something I'd want to associate with it, but indeed %3E I think that's probably a bit of a stretch...) Thanks very much for the comment though! %3B)

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michaelspitz Feb. 17 '10

*Client decided he wasn't feeling this guy, so it's back to the board... %3B)

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kathariney Feb. 17 '10

think it'd looks good as an app icon , love this tho.

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michaelspitz Feb. 18 '10

@kathariney - Thanks a bunch Katherine! :)

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ethereal Feb. 18 '10

Ah, that's too bad, Michael, I liked the move on the lines.

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michaelspitz Feb. 18 '10

@ethereal - Eh...no worries %3B) Thanks Sean!**As we all know, clients aren't always looking for straight up concept...%3Cbr%3EThat being said, I always like to try and sneak one in whenever I can %3B)

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Type08 Feb. 19 '10

Hey buddy, I love this one the most and I find it very original. It would work well with 3 fans as well since that's the most usual amount you can find on that device http://www.ecafeandbookstore.com/bookstore/images/36433_fan.jpg

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

@Type08 - Hey Alan! Thanks a lot! :)**I'll defenitely try out a tri-blade version!%3Cbr%3EStill don't think that client's up for it, but I'm sure we'll find a use for it somewhere... %3B)

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

%5EHa! %3B) Sorry Alen...

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Type08 Feb. 19 '10

No probs mate, Oronoz is Alan, I am Alen %3B) As a matter of fact, I would be Allain if my country had allowed the foreign names in 1978, as it didn't...

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Type08 Feb. 19 '10

LOL, now I wrote it wrong!!! I meant ALAIN! %3B) (as in Alain Delon)

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

%5E%5EHa! %3B) Thanks for the rundown Mr. A!

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ethereal Feb. 19 '10

Still like this one too, Michelle.

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Type08 Feb. 19 '10

LOL at Sewn! %3B)

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

@Type08 - :) Gave it a go with the tri-blade version...let me know what you think of this vs the quad-blade guy?

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Type08 Feb. 19 '10

In this case I would put the mark on the left so that this Italic effect looks like the letters are blown away from the fan! %3B)

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

@Type08 - Nice thought %3B) I'll be back...

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

UPDATED %3E Horizontal %26 Blown Away

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Type08 Feb. 19 '10

O YEAH BABY! LOVE IT! Whutcha think buddy?

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janzabransky Feb. 19 '10

%5E as Alen said ... faved

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michaelspitz Feb. 19 '10

@Type08 - %5E%5EHA! Cheers Allain! %3E Thanks for the suggestions! %3B)**@janzabransky - Thanks so much! :)

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ethereal Feb. 19 '10

Yeah! There we go, nice move. Good advice, Alvin!

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brandsimplicity Feb. 19 '10

Awesomeness...great advice Mr Pavlovic :)

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michaelspitz Feb. 20 '10

@ethereal %26 brandsimplicity - Thanks a bunch guys! %3B)

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logotivity Feb. 24 '10

i love this one best..

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michaelspitz Feb. 24 '10

@logotivity %26 Lecart - Thanks a lot guys!

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