Vanilla Sweet Bakery

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Description: For a bakery in Russia
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logomotive Dec. 19 '14

Layout is nice considering a long name to deal with. The cake or mark is lacking perspective looks to flat. The type seems to lack some pizzaz also. I like how you squared up the right side of slice of cake though. Just feel it's lacking a few things.

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logomotive Dec. 19 '14

Also the Slice of cake also looks like a V shape, perhaps you could take the cake and represent VANILLA and put Sweet Bakery beneath Vanilla. That is what I would recommend.

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nevatas Dec. 21 '14

Thank you, it's really good idea. But I will not edit this. :)

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logomotive Dec. 21 '14

OK, Just trying to help since you asked for critique :)

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kylernezin Dec. 21 '14

Please help me instead!

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chanpion Dec. 21 '14

That V idea Mike suggested is a great idea! So many little things that could be done to this nice logo to make it look even better. Oh well.

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