The Simms Method

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Description: WIP for Professor Simms who teaches voice and oratory techniques. As logo design is not my first specialty, please tell me how to improve. Client is already happy so no big changes
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sunspot Jun. 24 '08

Hey everyone, please help me learn from this! Thanks in advance.

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logomotive Jun. 24 '08

If the clients happy why bother? But I feel that ALL caps the same size is boring, perhaps break it up a little. Make it more interesting by contrast within type. Maybe also ditch the large blue circle don't see a need for it. Less is More.

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fogra Jun. 24 '08

It's a good study on shadow technique. It's difficult to fault this. If anything, the type may be a little too over-powering. Otherwise good.

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sunspot Jun. 24 '08

Well, bothering because I want to learn. Big blue circle is the spotlight. Did you get it and just not think it needed, or get it and not like it , or not get it?

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logomotive Jun. 24 '08

I just don't see why it needs a blue %22spotlight%22 added. the shadow conveys the lighting. Might look a little more cleaner and more logo like IMO if that makes sense.*

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