Agreed, very nice, but the last 'n' is bothering me a bit, and so is the hummingbird's belly. It looks like it had a few too many of whatever it is that hummingbirds drink during football season. imo, I would trim the chest out just a little bit- and maybe streamline the type by a hair.
Thx Chad, yeah I haven't noticed that thing about the bird before and I'm working on a serie of these for the same client so I really appreciate your help I'm just uploading another one, about the type I'm afraid can't do much about it at this point, there was a different thinner type at first so this is a compromise between me and the client.
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Another nice one kuentin.
Replythx a lot, I saw a similar approach on the hummingbird in your portfolio as well :)
ReplyAgreed, very nice, but the last 'n' is bothering me a bit, and so is the hummingbird's belly. It looks like it had a few too many of whatever it is that hummingbirds drink during football season. imo, I would trim the chest out just a little bit- and maybe streamline the type by a hair.
ReplyThx Chad, yeah I haven't noticed that thing about the bird before and I'm working on a serie of these for the same client so I really appreciate your help I'm just uploading another one, about the type I'm afraid can't do much about it at this point, there was a different thinner type at first so this is a compromise between me and the client.
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